…For those who don’t know, I am on my year of ‘pratical training’ - a year away from architecture, working in a 9-5 job, making good money, but being left with two much time on my hands. Too much time to think about things, has sent me into a small depression, I’ve had worse, but now small issues become blown up because inside the volume of my head, i now have hours to bounce around every permeation of; why did she said that? What did he mean?
To deal with this, I have started to write prolifically. i have written a few short stories, and am finishing, editing the most recent one, and, in my opinion, the best one. what follows this long (it was intended to be short) introduction to a snippet of my notes during this process….
here they are…
Notes on Paragraph 14 -
There are, in this story, four main actors, 1) G 2) His Brother 3)Noah Strom [author of a book G finds] and 4) the narrator
The structure an prose so far have meant that there have been collisions, and factions that have developed. Obviously G and the narrator are one and the same. Perceptions made by G are perceptions made by the narrator. and since G is the narrator then those are his perceptions too. The more literary thematic combination is that of the Author and and G’s brother. They have at least in the brain of G become inseparable, collided and fuse together. If this pattern emerges where all characters begin to become on - not in a Fight Club Palanhuik way - but in something more in the Bolanian style ” Chirico: we are going to fill our head with all human problems, such that things begin to move inside themselves, an extraordinary vision of main…..
Without trying to write for some grand purpose or goal, it has been interesting to see a theme, or something touching on a theme - or if not a theme a device, emerge. in a sense, its rather bleak, if all four characters can be collided into one, it says extrapolating that all humans can be collided into one point. a black hole view of humanity.
Merry christsmas..
PS. need to stop taking sleeping pills
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